Sunday, 29 May 2016

Drenched



drenched in rain
we kissed each other
abating the pain
that did not matter

locked in arms
the shower-cloud smiled
we make rainbows
that stretch across miles



PS: This is my first poem written in collaboration with my husband :-)


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19 comments:

  1. Donna29 May 2016 at 09:19

    What a lovely poem...and I especially liked that it was written by you and your husband...a great theme to choose!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  2. Sanaa Rizvi29 May 2016 at 09:23

    A most gorgeous declaration of love beneath the sparkling drops of rain :D Beautifully penned. Thank you so much Amrit and Anusha for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support :D

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  3. brudberg29 May 2016 at 09:29

    Oh we need to let those rainbows span.

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  4. Sherry Blue Sky29 May 2016 at 09:43

    I like the image of the shower-cloud smiling, and the creating of rainbows.

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  5. Gina29 May 2016 at 10:14

    And what a wondrous collaboration it is. Put a smile on my face :D XXX

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  6. scotthastiepoet29 May 2016 at 11:14

    Good stuff - I look forward to more stuff from you two...

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  7. Magaly Guerrero29 May 2016 at 13:28

    I could live in the last three lines of your poem. Magnificent!

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  8. Mary29 May 2016 at 16:54

    What a beautifully romantic poem!!

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  9. Sumana Roy29 May 2016 at 22:38

    so very sweet....

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  10. Old Egg30 May 2016 at 02:26

    One of my wife and my delights was to walk in the rain together.

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  11. Jae Rose30 May 2016 at 04:04

    Shower-cloud smiles - what a wonderful image in this glorious poem

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  12. Locomente30 May 2016 at 04:37

    Beautiful one... Romance gleaming in your words...
    So here is the leaflet of the greenspeck I guess :)

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  13. Debi Swim30 May 2016 at 05:38

    we make rainbows
    that stretch across miles..... the love shows bright and clear. Wonderful

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  14. Rosemary Nissen-Wade30 May 2016 at 07:25

    Lovely collaboration – on and off the page.

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  15. Myrna R.30 May 2016 at 10:16

    How nice to write something so lovely together. May you both collaborate beautifully on all the important poems of your lives.

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  16. Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger30 May 2016 at 18:01

    Ah--this feels lovely and fresh! Thank you!

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  17. Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger30 May 2016 at 18:01

    Ah--this feels lovely and fresh! Thank you!

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  18. Khaya Ronkainen30 May 2016 at 22:11

    Such a memorable and romantic picture. How I love your rainbows that stretch across miles!

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  19. Sherry Blue Sky5 June 2016 at 11:23

    Very sweet, a love poem penned by husband and wife!

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