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Let's go out and play in sand
Make some memories
In this unknown land
Sail on boat and touch the sky
Soak in sun as birds fly by
Dive into the blue
View the mystic hue
Let's go out and feel the balmy shore
Cry out loud from deep within the core
Surrender to eternity
For a minute or two
Find your existence
And detach yourself
From the worldly glue
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I love the flow of this poem - like waves themselves and how very good to surrender and go outside ourselves - perhaps it helps see things anew..
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DeleteHas a real fun feel
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Deletethat last line is what gives the rest a sense of daring do so well chartered in the poet's spontaneity p.s. we have both chosen a marine theme
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DeleteLove the message to be daring and courageous in your poem :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sanaa
DeleteNice! Sometimes we do have to go out from where we are, detach ourselves a bit, gain a new perspective, in order to find our own existence.
ReplyDeleteYes Mary sometimes it is important to detach ourselves and seek inspiration
Delete"Let's go out and play in sand / Make some memories / In this unknown land" beautifully put...
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DeleteThis is flows so beautifully... the rhymes are perfect, like waves lapping the shore....
ReplyDeleteThank You Bjorn
DeleteI feel the lifting up and away in this poem....very nice.
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DeleteIt is glue, Isn't it? I enjoy your word choice, making the rhyme and meter delightful. For a few minutes and more, I'm glad to accompany you.
ReplyDeleteIt will be my pleasure to have your company Susan
DeleteThis sounds like a smashingly excellent idea :-)
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DeleteSounds like fun!
ReplyDeleteThe last line says it all!! Truly uplifting...
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DeleteIt's more like a beautiful song. So inspiring. Loved it <3
ReplyDeleteThank you Simran
Deletenice word pictures in my mind.
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