Sunday, 17 January 2016

Hollow Words



 The promises they made
Under a moonlit sky
To be loyal and follow
Each others shadow
As season changed
And time ticked by
He felt caged
Woeful and wry
The promises they made
One full moon night
Now languishing in a corner
Love wondered why?

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7 comments:

  1. Amrit Sinha17 January 2016 at 23:28

    So many questions are often left unanswered ... beautifully written :-)

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  2. Anonymous18 January 2016 at 12:28

    Oh my - a sad story but well written. Love your poem. It aches. An excellent take on the prompt!

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  3. Vinay Leo R.19 January 2016 at 09:59

    Beautiful, yet poignant. Even I wonder what happened.

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  4. Womanzie26 January 2016 at 07:23

    Great lines with great feelings....

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  5. Simran2 February 2016 at 01:35

    Hi Anusha di,
    I heartily welcome you to blogging. A very intense take on the prompt.
    Hope to read more from you.

    Thanks for participating!
    Simran

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    1. Anusha Das2 February 2016 at 08:04

      Yes of course Simran Thanks for your appreciation

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