Wednesday 12 July 2017

Fading Trails

14 comments:

  1. era and aura bygone... nicely said.

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  2. I liked your description of the wrecked paper boat and the future "fading trail".

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  3. This is the essence of sorrow (sigh). Well written!

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  4. Love the paperboat... such a good metaphor.

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  5. Oh, sad, and yet it makes for interesting rhyme and word play.
    Fading trails in flimsy paper and era and aura.

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  6. The paper boat of her dreams is a great description. I can feel her sadness, with those glorious days long-gone.

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  7. Beautifully penned verse. Emotions so well portrayed and delivered.

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  8. We are always saddened when we look back as then we had the future to look forward to.

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  9. 'Paper boat' image is apt. So vulnerable.

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  10. Beautiful expression of lost dreams

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  11. Beautifully evocative..!!❤️

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  12. Nicely woven poem - great work

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  13. Melancholy.. Sense of loss... Well expressed

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