era and aura bygone... nicely said.
I liked your description of the wrecked paper boat and the future "fading trail".
This is the essence of sorrow (sigh). Well written!
Love the paperboat... such a good metaphor.
Oh, sad, and yet it makes for interesting rhyme and word play.Fading trails in flimsy paper and era and aura.
The paper boat of her dreams is a great description. I can feel her sadness, with those glorious days long-gone.
Beautifully penned verse. Emotions so well portrayed and delivered.
We are always saddened when we look back as then we had the future to look forward to.
'Paper boat' image is apt. So vulnerable.
Beautiful expression of lost dreams
Beautifully evocative..!!❤️
Nicely woven poem - great work
Just lovely!
Melancholy.. Sense of loss... Well expressed
era and aura bygone... nicely said.
ReplyDeleteI liked your description of the wrecked paper boat and the future "fading trail".
ReplyDeleteThis is the essence of sorrow (sigh). Well written!
ReplyDeleteLove the paperboat... such a good metaphor.
ReplyDeleteOh, sad, and yet it makes for interesting rhyme and word play.
ReplyDeleteFading trails in flimsy paper and era and aura.
The paper boat of her dreams is a great description. I can feel her sadness, with those glorious days long-gone.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned verse. Emotions so well portrayed and delivered.
ReplyDeleteWe are always saddened when we look back as then we had the future to look forward to.
ReplyDelete'Paper boat' image is apt. So vulnerable.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful expression of lost dreams
ReplyDeleteBeautifully evocative..!!❤️
ReplyDeleteNicely woven poem - great work
ReplyDeleteJust lovely!
ReplyDeleteMelancholy.. Sense of loss... Well expressed
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