Sunday 29 May 2016

Drenched



drenched in rain
we kissed each other
abating the pain
that did not matter

locked in arms
the shower-cloud smiled
we make rainbows
that stretch across miles



PS: This is my first poem written in collaboration with my husband :-)


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19 comments:

  1. What a lovely poem...and I especially liked that it was written by you and your husband...a great theme to choose!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  2. A most gorgeous declaration of love beneath the sparkling drops of rain :D Beautifully penned. Thank you so much Amrit and Anusha for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support :D

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  3. Oh we need to let those rainbows span.

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  4. I like the image of the shower-cloud smiling, and the creating of rainbows.

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  5. And what a wondrous collaboration it is. Put a smile on my face :D XXX

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  6. Good stuff - I look forward to more stuff from you two...

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  7. I could live in the last three lines of your poem. Magnificent!

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  8. What a beautifully romantic poem!!

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  9. One of my wife and my delights was to walk in the rain together.

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  10. Shower-cloud smiles - what a wonderful image in this glorious poem

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  11. Beautiful one... Romance gleaming in your words...
    So here is the leaflet of the greenspeck I guess :)

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  12. we make rainbows
    that stretch across miles..... the love shows bright and clear. Wonderful

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  13. Lovely collaboration – on and off the page.

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  14. How nice to write something so lovely together. May you both collaborate beautifully on all the important poems of your lives.

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  15. Ah--this feels lovely and fresh! Thank you!

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  16. Ah--this feels lovely and fresh! Thank you!

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  17. Such a memorable and romantic picture. How I love your rainbows that stretch across miles!

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  18. Very sweet, a love poem penned by husband and wife!

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