Thursday, 14 January 2016

Snowy Lines

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A Shimmering light
In this foggy night
A Light of hope
For struggles to cope
Hope of peace bowl
To calm my thundering soul
This wintry snow
Flame that glow
Burying all my sorrow
For a better tomorrow

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  1. If I've posted twice I'm sorry. I couldn't tell if the first posted. I love those first three verses. So full of hope and tenderness.

  2. I am having great difficulty commenting.
    I wanted to thank you for participating in Tale Weaver and for writing such a rhythmic poem of hope.

  3. I think the notion of a better tomorrow serves us all as an aspiration to live by...well done enjoyed the imagery you created.

  4. Very beautifully written ... loved the positive note towards the end :-)